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  1. #51
    thanks..u too vampy..u too
    Denis: There is something I don't entirely trust about this guy..
    John: Just because he just killed a girl in front of us..?

  2. #52
    im thinking about changing my username to "xoxoSkaterGirlxoxo"

    What do you think Denis?
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  3. #53
    and since when you are a skater? or a girl?
    Denis: There is something I don't entirely trust about this guy..
    John: Just because he just killed a girl in front of us..?

  4. #54
    I changed into a skater...been actualy. and ive been a girl my whole life thank you
    did you really think i was a guy this whole time!!!!! hahaha! and that i was gay!!!! LO-freaking-L!!!!! ROFL
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  5. #55
    err when you calling me a dude and thanks man and stuff..they are man's comments and if you scroll up you will read that you are accepting that you are a guy but anyway..girl you want? girl then! i don't care so much they are just forums here my dear..
    Denis: There is something I don't entirely trust about this guy..
    John: Just because he just killed a girl in front of us..?

  6. #56
    Im sorry. But im just not much of one of those girly girls. Sorry if i made you think that. Im still the same. Same person, and still want to be your friend.
    And im straight. Just lettin ya know. Because i have a bf. I just hope you can find a match in this world as well "my dear".
    signature imageAngel of Darkness

  7. #57
    no problem girl..better like that i can talk with girls much easier than boys! boys always the same..always one thing..u know
    Denis: There is something I don't entirely trust about this guy..
    John: Just because he just killed a girl in front of us..?

  8. #58
    Ha. okay. I need to get back to writing poetry...i havnt wrote any in so long....

    "Here in the night...
    Cold, Dark creatures lurk...
    A mystery...
    Just sitting right in front of us unseen,
    Shall remain unsolved...
    But not completely hidden.

    Some of us know what is out there....
    Just keeping to themselves,
    Hiding in secret...
    Remain unknown to reality...."

    Hoped you liked! Its a bit wierd...I just threw it together!
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  9. #59
    Heres another!!!!

    "Reflections gaze upon me.
    Parts of me i dont understand...
    Anger...
    Passion...
    Grief...
    All stare at me in the eyes.

    This does not make sence.
    Who am I now....?"

    I wasnt in the mood to write poems, but had to...I dont care for this one much at all...
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  10. #60
    nice poems! go and be a part at maluxia's poem thread vampy!! i did
    Denis: There is something I don't entirely trust about this guy..
    John: Just because he just killed a girl in front of us..?

  11. #61
    Wait.....where that at?
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  12. #62
    nevermind.

    And it looks like im the only one that talks here...o well...

    "You kiss me one minute...
    I feel safe, comforted...
    Like i belong....
    The rest of the day...in love!

    The next day...magic is gone....
    I dont matter to you....
    Im alone,
    In the dark...trying...
    To hide.
    And you make me feel like im crazy..."

    That is how im feeling today. Yesterday i felt like whats in the first paragraph of the poem. I was with my bf that day... and yea. That is how i feel today....


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  13. #63
    Heres another short poem

    "Dont you see what your doing to me....
    My love.
    Or do i hide it too well...

    Trying to act like im okay..
    Because everytime somethings wrong...and i tell you
    You dont seem to understand all the time...
    Sometimes..maybe.
    Most....You make me feel like im doing wrong..."
    signature imageAngel of Darkness

  14. #64
    Heres a short poem. Now im writing them how i feel. And i writing them faster...thats why they kinda suck now.
    "Understanding...FINALLY!
    Wanting me, Loving me...
    Kiss me... because you are...
    The only one who who loves me for ME"
    signature imageAngel of Darkness

  15. #65
    Obviously no one ever comes back to look at what ive created. I miss you Denis. And i have to keep this thread alive. I have no where else to express myself.

    "Fire..
    hot, bright, burning everything innocent.
    Hell has approached.
    Demons roam, tormenting all living...
    Feeding off of our fear..

    Now, the skies open up...
    The clouds part.
    Heaven reins down to concor all evil...
    Good triumphs evil.....
    The lord has saved us once again..."

    hoped you liked it.... miss everyone....
    signature imageAngel of Darkness

  16. #66
    lol vampy..
    long time no talk..
    im sorry i haven't read at your latest poems but here im now..

    how r u?
    Denis: There is something I don't entirely trust about this guy..
    John: Just because he just killed a girl in front of us..?

  17. #67
    just a quick one:

    The horses are grey and drunk on berries
    Every little beetle has tiny beetle shoes
    Mostly it happens in the late morning rush
    For clues
    Nicely nicely girls don't push
    Follow the beetles and their little beetle tracks
    Sometimes they end in the cold of the evening
    Hard smacks

  18. #68
    a poem in under a minute:

    Heversham, Henry, and Jolly St. Nick,
    Went window shopping with half a brick.
    The children woke all sleepy, yawning,
    Rosy smiles on Christmas morning.

  19. #69
    Iiiiim BACK!!!! LOL hope to go back to comn to this site continuously. Hopefully this time i can make my poems cheerful-ish I love my life now!

    Sooooo....

    "Hearing your voice...
    So strong, so caring and serene...
    Your heart beats in sync with mine
    Until it stops for when your lips caress mine

    Lost without you, I am...
    One day you will hold me in your arms once again...
    And the smile upon my face will stay...
    You are my love,
    My muse,
    My SOULMATE!"

    <3
    signature imageAngel of Darkness

  20. #70
    OMG i hate all my older poems i wrote bc they are about this certain someone i cant stand anymore (looong story)

    annnnnyyyywwwaaayyyy......

    "Kisses softer than the rays of light
    Caress gentler than flakes of snow...
    Voice tenderly calling my name
    supports me once i fall,
    Cradle me when im cold
    Stops the tears from drifting off my cheeks,
    Knows when i need to laugh...

    and I know in that moment...
    I know,

    He is My One And Only...."

    that one was kinda bad poem, darn...but im exausted. Stayed up alll night
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  21. #71
    Too Many E's

    Shout at the sun
    Shake your fist at the trees
    Scream at the flowers
    The birds, and the bees
    Vomit your love
    Spit it back in breeze
    And melt in the heat
    Of my kissing disease

  22. #72
    I'm glad you are happy.
    I'm not.

    Cry me a river.

  23. #73
    Im sorry Slappy (found u a nickname ) but anyway ill try to make a good poem...?

    "Light enters my world...
    Im so close to grasping that only warmth and comfort i used to know...
    But everytime i get too close, it shrivels away from me...
    Emotions get scatterd,
    My heart throbs and shatters
    Eyes begin to flood, and streak down my cheeks
    And i am left in the cold darkness of loneliness without you..."


    Wow i need to work on my poetry :\
    signature imageAngel of Darkness

  24. #74
    Slap me happy

    Its hard to write dark stuff when you are happy.
    And its actually quite good in parts. Except the word "shrivels" made me think "*", and
    I didn't read the rest of the line properly.
    "But everytime i get too close, *..."


    apparently I can't say "*"

  25. #75
    so i guess that one was quite bad....ill get better..

    I cant think of one right now...i try and try but nothing good comes :'( Have i lost my poem tecnique???
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